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its not bad, you just cant really understand alot of the audio, were the dialogue more clear it would have been a much better project
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HAAAA, this game was fun before you could play other people, now its even more fun, especially when i pwn n00bs
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not too bad. especially for a first flash. you just need to refine the movements a bit. the story was kind of weird but cool in a way. and even if your microphone didnt suck i would suggest that you dont use real voice, text dialogue suits this sort of flash perfectly well.
Author's Response:
thank you =)
i tried my best to do the movements as smooth as possible, and at the end, i got better at it...atleast i think so =) but i just wanted to see how i progressed =)
ill take your advice and not use voices =)
thank you for the review!!
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bit of advice, keep school projects off of here unless they make someone cry (and not because of how bad it is), or laugh or termble with fear. But the graphics are really good and i think if you mixed tha artistry with some good plot and a dash of character development you would have yourself a good flash.
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besides the fact that you took something hilarious that already existed and just made it your own doesnt affect this flash as bad as i thought it would. The art work seriously needs to be more than some poorly drawn charicatures and some other random pictures that were copy/pasted.
thats why you only get a 3, actually, you were lucky to even get that.
Author's Response:
it's 4 now
redesign hehe
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the story behind this and the sceneplay is pretty cool, although the grammar is horrible. i have the feeling, mr medina, that you are spanish and threw your script into a translator then ran that through the robot voice thing. and if thats the case, i shouldnt be too hard on you because atleast you didnt do it in spanish
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if this was your first animation, then im brittany spears, and let me tell you, im no pop idol gone trailor trash......it was good.
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"trogdor the burninator meets sobe"
i may have gievn you a better score if you hadnt stolen trogdor from string bad. and maybe a better score if you had used the better drawn version of trogdor. and maybe if you hadnt put trogdor on a sobe bottle. but the animations were in the likeness of red bull, and it was kinda funny.
Author's Response:
it's not trogdor!!!!
It's the "the S is for sucks" dragon!
but yes, it was from strong bad. I am a failure as a cartoonist and a father.
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"english essay? more like shminglish shmessay"
i agree with the guy who said this isnt the type of thing to post on newgrounds. but thats besides the point, since this was based on your english paper, im guessing you got like a C or something right? no from content, but on grammar and syntax (word order). the graphics werent bad though.
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it reminds me of that game jezz ball, i dont know if anyone else has ever played that or not.
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